3rd Grade Writings

Reece has been working on a writing a lot in 3rd grade. Here is his practice story he wrote to get ready for state assessments. He was given this prompt... "What is your favorite pair of shoes?"

Step, step, step. When I walk in my favorite pair of shoes they aren't too loud. They aren't too quiet. They are just right! I really like my shoes because of the colors. Silver, black, and white. Every day, I look at my shoes in the morning thinking they're the best shoes ever. My shoes are very comfortable and if I fall on my feet it won't hurt too much. I think it's because I bought them less than a year ago and they're in great shape. I try to do my best to keep them in great shape because of the colors. I really like my favorite pair of shoes because of all those things and I hope you like you shoes.

It's just so cute watching kids grow in the writing department...I can tell he gives his best.

Here is another one with the prompt, "What do you do at recess?"

Scream, you're it, come on! The sounds of recess, getting a break from learning and getting fresh air. I like recess. One reason is that I like to run and play because it's nice to get active after learning and run. Another reason is to get fresh air to your brain because it pumps more blood to your brain and fresh air is better. I also like it because it's good to exercise because more blood to your brain and you get stronger. I hope you do all of these things to help you stay focused.

So he like the word "because" and he definitely repeats his main points often... haha! Either way it's cute coming from a 9 year old.